31/01/2016




monochrome squirrel 
only thing moving in freeze 
paused on snow 
---

oravan tauko 
mustavalkotammikuu 
paussi sulaa pois 


30/01/2016




two halves of a larch 
standing in the sunny freeze 
black and white winter 
---

lehtikuusi 
latva kesän jo näkee 
tyvi talveen jää 


29/01/2016




white Lamborghini 
atop an old red Volvo 
made in Lapland 
---

lumen taidetta 
valkea Lamborghini 
Volvon päällä 


28/01/2016

27/01/2016

3 alphabetical senryu on skylarks

  --- A trio of silly alphabetical(*) senryu with the prompt "skylark". ---


ornitologist
promptly quashes riot
skylark tazered
---
skylark tackles
unbelievable views with
yellowhammer's zest
---
kwit larking man
no ornitology puns
quips rare skylark
---


(*) Spot the deliberate mistakes...





in fell's blue shade 
January freeze lingers 
the outlook sunny
---

tunturin varjo 
pakkanen säilöttynä 
aurinko siintää 


26/01/2016




shoot up the soft slope 
crispy snow softly shining 
skis briskly hissing 
---

sauvo suhisten 
säntää ylös vastainen 
sujuta sukset 


25/01/2016




like turning a page 
you know to take a new turn 
when necessary 
---

hiirikin tietää 
joskus suunnanmuutos 
on välttämätön 


24/01/2016




the dark night will come 
as the moon follows the sun 
sleeping white forest 
---

yö seuraa päivää 
kuin kuu aurinkoa 
lumi metsän jää 


23/01/2016




ancient recycling 
hiding under snowy shroud 
absent birch leaves 
---

luonto kierrättää 
lehdet alla lumiverhon 
koivujen horros 


22/01/2016




shadows in the snow 
yesteryear's weed wearing 
sparkles from the sun 
---

lumen varjot 
auringon hiutaleita 
rikkaruoholla 


21/01/2016

January's senryu collection


Assorted senryu, Vol II

A collection of my ramblings on Twitter. I hope these amuse, entertain or annoy you, maybe even enough to leave a comment.

---
nothing will
fill your heart with joy
like the midday sun
---
eying icy steps
gathering up my courage
a downhill struggle
---
walking on the brink
the cat was pushing it's luck
ended up in drink
---
in front of TV
about to bow to the gods
of wasted time
---
inexplicable
I have no explanation
yet it all makes sense
---
birch trees at dusk
darkness trying to teach
the sun a lesson
---
to teach is to show
just like writing a haiku
no explanation
---
to teach is to show
much like to write a haiku
do not tell
---
an online swindle
computer hacked, I struggle 
with con's science
---
you're never too old
to teach an elderly dog
new tricks
---
finish a verse
get the syllables to match
bask in false glory
---
that's my book started
all it took was pondering
twenty years is nowt
---
old or young
the proverbial dog
always learns
---
some of us ought to
drink from the fountain of couth
to trump lunacy
---
a haiku a day 
keeps the noggin doctor at... 
the starting blocks 
---
to believe in fate
a bit like trusting a farm
only with a tee
---
trying to billow 
brain the size of a planet 
coming up with wisps 
---
frosty the snowman
asks for no explanation
winks knowlingly
---
snowing sideways
duvet day is my protest
the world can wait
---
a startled cat
photographer in search of
the purrrfect shot
---
the challenge I have
come up with a funny line
failed -- boom-no-tish!
---
two thousand haiku
all I've got to show for it
a loaf of stale poems
---

--- Some Science Haiku, i.e. Sciku. I see these more as senryu than haiku: ---

may every force be
with equal and opposite
as well as with you
---
rim and corona
total eclipse of the sun
the brightest diamond
---
rim and corona
while the sun joins the dark side
brightest diamond shines
---
medieval jewel
primitive planetarium

astronomical!
---

  --- Yes, it really was National Cheeselovers' Day somewhere in or around Twitterland: ---

a very merry
#nationalcheeseloversday
primary dairy
---

  --- Murdoch / Mrs Merton thingie: ---

no need to wonder
what attracted Jerry to
the millioneer guy
---

  --- An old joke turned into senryu: ---

Just can't put it down
I'm reading a book about
antigravity
---

--- This one loses its effect without the associated photo of the "ICY" licence plate in the snow: ---

a licence plate
states bleeding obvious
the cheeky blinder
---

  --- Project Runway assessment: ---
  
designers bitching
outcamping each other
make it work!
---

--- Three senryu to the prompt "Venetian" ---

a venetian mask
fit for pantalone
no one to hide from
---
how to compile
the uncompilable verse
I no speak venetian!
---
tintoretto paints
like a good samaritan
or venetian
---





night's moonlit forest 
perfect snowy harmony 
dark and light mingle 
---

lumi valaistu 
päivä vai yö metsässä 
kuu kyselee 


20/01/2016




reindeer and calf 
crispy snow underhoof 
winter's soft light 
---

poroillakin on 
talvipäivän seisaus 
silmät tarkkana 


19/01/2016




frosted fell spruces 
siege from oncoming snow 
paints the world grey 
---

tunturikuuset 
lisää lunta odottaa 
harmaa jo saapui 


18/01/2016




waiting for summer 
blue and white hide the green 
snow without sunblock 
---

tammikuun loppu 
sinivalkea metsä 
aurinkoa juo 


17/01/2016




dynamic trio 
hare, magpie and gentleman 
must've been a sight 
---

kova kolmikko 
jänis, harakka ja mies 
yhdessä kulkee 


16/01/2016



frozen river 
blinks at first rays of the sun 
otter's pink drawing 
---

jäisen joen 
vuoden ensisäteissä 
saukko pulkkaillut 


15/01/2016



towards hazy clouds 
a journey to clarity 
crispy winter's day 
---

valosta pilveen 
talven kulkijalle 
raja häämöttää 



14/01/2016



a frozen moment 
nothing can crack the winter 
the world in blue 
---

talvi seisahtaa 
mikään ei voi liikauttaa 
sinistä maailmaa 



13/01/2016




scattered diamonds 
low winter's sun glistening 
stoat's icy highway 
---

lumitimantit 
sulavat hitaasti 
kärpän pikatie 



12/01/2016




messages beaming 
into the satellite dish 
lights from outer space 
---

antenni kuulee 
signaalit avaruuden 
revontuletkin? 


11/01/2016



sharp crackle of ice 
the wilderness unperturbed 
cygnets' soft feathers 
--- 

rapea päivä 
erämaa ei palele 
linnutkin sitkaat 



10/01/2016




reindeer on the lake 
minus forty below 
blue skies above 
---

porot jäällä 
aitta vahtii rannalta 
pakkanen paukkuu 




09/01/2016



fells shivering 
in frozen pastel landscape 
shadow of the earth 
---

pallas poseeraa 
talven pastelleissa 
maapallon varjo 




08/01/2016



lake in midwinter 
sky already seeing warmth 
the solstice has gone 
--- 

järvi ei tiedä 
varjot sen piilottaa 
kesä lähenee 



07/01/2016




the end of a birch 
woodchips on crystalline snow 
beaver's work started 
--- 

koivun loppu 
padon ja pesän alku 
majavan työmaa 




06/01/2016



last year's hare 
screeched to sudden a halt 
time to change coat 
---

jänis havahtuu 
pysähtyy uuteen lumeen 
turkinvaihto nyt! 



05/01/2016



the frozen forest 
from monochrome to colours 
first glimpse of the sun 
---

jäätynyt metsä 
oranssi maalaa harmaan 
kaamoksen loppu 


04/01/2016

A collection of haiku / Kokoelma haikuja

This is a bonus post, a collection of my haiku

Most of them have been published on Twitter by my tweeting presence @haikuinenFeel free to follow me on Twitter. :)

---
feasting reindeer 
under a notion of sun 
crispy foothold 
---
talvilaidun 
aurinko kätkettynä 
rapea kaamos 
---
a bee can distract
end furious gasping
hiccups interned
(an alphabetical haiku)
---
January breeze
leaves rushing past the bus stop
no two are the same
---
big bang for a start
the calendar does not shrink
there is no end
-----
new frost in old snow
shimmering crystals of sun
nature's bling bling
---
tundra is my castle 
fur to keep away the cold 
antlers to crown me 
---
the wind is awake 
ocean beneath the cliffs
tired stone
---
spiral of the snail
a journey to its centre
in search of me
---
a fly on the wall
standing, flying and all-seeing
needs no ears or hands
-----

Haiku are poems structured roughly thus:
three lines, first line five syllables, second line seven syllables 
and third line five syllables. They usually deal with nature and (can) include 
several different 'quirks' to make them... well... haiku!



A collection of senryu / Senryu-kokoelma


This is a bonus post, a collection of my senryu


Most of them have been published on Twitter by my tweeting presence @haikuinenFeel free to follow me on Twitter. :)

---
hills fading away
the horizon eats them up
total abandon
---
top of a fell
the moon won't abandon sky
lakes laced with pink
---
liika julkisuus
hyötyy vain #teriniitti
#imetysgate rulez
---
last year's plans
swans fly off to the sunset
the penny drops
---
the hour has come
baker street at the ready
sherlock has landed
---
abominable
good things come to he who waits
sherlock and watson
---
mouldy old bunch
crackers the lot of them
blue cheese eats well
---
snail yarn leeks bulb joke 
list your things googled today 
then forgotten 
---
gone the fireworks
remember last year through smoke
daze gone by
---
tekisinkö nyt
ensi vuonna ehtii kai
kiirekö tässä
---
just wondering
what can I leave til next year
twenty minutes in
---
looking for a clue
shopping detectives find none
shop full of weeds
---
new year's rocket
in a blaze of vainglory
racket bonanza
---
winning formula
I drive just a tad faster
fifty seconds won
---
losing formula
I drive just a tad faster
ninety dollars lost
---
ten past eleven
minutes from the future
so happy new year
---
man's quest to impress
burns crateloads of gunpowder
smoke aids his vision?
---
kaksituhatta
sanoi mustapartainen
mies kuusitoista
---
communication
the world has come to a halt
#whatsapp is down
-----

Senryu follow the same structure as haiku but have subject matters 

more to do with man, life and feelings, rather than nature 
and seasons like haiku. Wittiness and jokes are allowed.